Double Haiku for Eric Alagan: Humanity fell

Yesterday I read a thought provoking post by Eric Alagan, which stimulated me to write this double Haiku in comment.  The Post is entitled: Salvation- 55 word flash fiction.  Eric is one of the most stimulating writers I’ve met on WordPress and I always look forward to one of his posts.  You might want to take a look at this one, it’d be a great way to meet him…the comments are very interesting too!

Humanity fell
Like ashes from a chimey
Over the winter land
And still we lament
Ignoring our choices as
Many follow still.

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