Free Verse
Illusion
As the train speeds past
the Pandana valley
I ask myself
which is the illusion:
the fleeting passage
of the tracks
and landscape
or that
the
scenes I usually see
and take for granted
are not the illusions
of time standing still?
Wow – that poem is incredibly powerful! Love this post. : ))
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Thank you…the photos suggested it to me. 🙂
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Love the poem. It adds an extra dimension to the photos.
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Thanks, I’m happy you liked the combination, they just seemed so right together.
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If we could really just have “time in a bottle”, then,life wouldn’t be a breeze.
Thanks for the pingback and for the great pictures.
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🙂 you’re very welcome and thanks for your rose!
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Great poem…
Thanks for the visit and ping back 🙂
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🙂 my pleasure both!
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Thank you so very much for the pingback! Your pics so beautifully illustrate your poem, and both are perfect for the challenge.
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Don’t mention the pingback! Thanks for your lovely comment!
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