Ye Olde Foole wrote: “obsessed with seeing how short I can make the lines and it still end up with something meaningful…” Here he wrote a Kyrielle Sonnet with two syllables per line!
I thought I’d try this experiment too…but couldn’t get proper sonnet rhyming and still have something meaningful…I take my hat off to the Maestro!
To Ride
I swoon
To ride
The moon
With you
Without
Her light
Our dance
is naught
Stars smile
At me
As tears
Flow down
Some day
We’ll ride
Low moon
We two
But now
I wait.
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Two syllables per line is impressive. You made it work very nicely.
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Yes, but not in proper rhyme…oh sigh. 😉 thanks I like encouragement.
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Reblogged this on Bastet and Sekhmet's Library and commented:
A fantastic summer experiment A Kyrielle Sonnet with just two syllables per line created by Ye Olde Foole…I tried the form…fantastic!
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Lovely!
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It was a great moment of experimention!
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Don’t you just LOVE those?!!
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Yes…I really do love those and very much too!!!
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I think you did a great job.
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Thanks dear…I haven’t seen you in a while, hope life is treating you well!
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I’ve had a challenging week and a half – hopefully life will be back to normal soon!
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let’s hope so…know what you mean.
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You know, today doing my prompt for WDBWP you and others came to mind because of the awful wind that’s been sweeping the planet. I hope this troubled period is over for you soon.
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Thank you. Just waiting to have the power restored so I can go home.
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Hope it happens soon!
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Me too!
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