“Not only the thirsty seek the water, the water as well seeks the thirsty.” – Rumi
Walking down the path near the lake, contemplating the early morning silence, glad to be alone.
Sitting on a bench was a young women. She looked sad. Suddenly our eyes met and I could have been peering into a 40 years younger me in a mirror. I recognized the tell-tale signs of the aftermath of an argument, the search for reasons behind unreasonable situations. How often, then, I’d wished for someone to be there, just be present so I didn’t feel so alone. We smiled. I hesitated only for a moment and went over to her.
“How about a cup of coffee?” I smiled.
“Yes, that would be great!” She replied.
similar paths
samsara recognized
overcome
Written for Ligo Haibun Challenge: Persian Words
other participants:
- Haibun: Samara Recognized (bastetandsekhmet.wordpress.com)
- Thirst (highfiveandraspberries.wordpress.com)
- http://joyfulcacophony.wordpress.com/2013/09/06/haibun-challenge-thirsty/
- http://call2read.com/2013/09/10/ligo-haibun-challenge-life/
- http://kattermonran.com/2013/09/10/ligo-haibun-challenge-fountain-of-youth/
- http://seraphim6.me/2013/09/10/thirsty-seekers-a-ligo-haibun-affair/
- http://angieinspired.wordpress.com/2013/09/11/i-dont-know-im-thirsty/
Beautiful photograph. Beautiful story.
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Thanks very much.
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Beautiful story…where were you when I walked along the lake many years ago?
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Alas, probably sitting somewhere hoping someone would offer a friendly smile and an invitation for a cup of coffee 😉
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You’ve inspired me to write something…in my notebook for now:)
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Great! Love the idea of inspiring someone 🙂
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very good. and thank you for taking part:)
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You wrote a very good story too! 🙂
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“tell-tale signs of the aftermath of an argument”…love the way you weave your story and then bring everything together with the verse at the end. Perfect picture for the haibun too. 🙂
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thanks…love haibun 😉
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This is great. Maybe I should do that sometime.
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Haibun’s are very interesting…I did one for last week’s Friday Fictoneers by the way, here’s the shortlink in case you might be interested: http://wp.me/p31In3-1Wl
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i enjoyed your haibun offering – the simplicity of the moment yet complexity of emotions beneath each character –
the haiku made a nice finish. thanks for sharing and the ping back. 🙂
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I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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beautiful. ❤
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This is precious, and absolutely beautiful.
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Thanks very much Pirate! Glad you liked it.
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