Haiku
winter solstice dance
yule log’s burning sacrifice
firey life’s renewal
modern feast of light
an electric sacrifice
turkeys and pudding
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For CarpeDiem Haiku Kai : Crann Na Beatha, the tree of life.
N.B. I rewrote these haiku…the first refers to the Celtic Winter Solstice…the second to our consumeristic Christmas.
Beautiful haiku … I like the comparison you’ve made. Thank you for sharing.
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thank you…I rewrote the two with my son…we had a lot of fun especially as he doesn’t write poetry and says he understands nothing about haiku…so I explained the principles to him and we worked these out together…one in the past one for the present 🙂
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Awesome … my wife and kids do like haiku, but don’t understand it.
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I see you can understand, same here…that’s why it was such a pleasure.
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