jumping – splashing
up into the sky he went
creating fun waves
puddles growing deep
invite the child’s happy feet
perplexed … dog looks on
April showers fell
creating puddles everywhere
wet playgrounds
ripples in a puddle
no waves of consequence
drops of rain
Very good
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Thanks!
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Love it! Except… my dog wouldn’t look on, perplexed. No, she’d be right in there with the jumper.
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I think most would…I was using the photo to guide me and that pup seemed to be saying…hey! This guy is crazy!
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Lovely. Puddles are so inviting for kids
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Thanks…that photo was so much fun.
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🙂
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I enjoyed these but I like the last one best.
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The last one is really closer to a classical haiku, so I can understand that as I like the classics very much myself. Thanks for commenting.
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wanted to do one on kids and then I changed my mind. These are so good! 🙂
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Thanks, I just read your haiku and loved it…it’s still rippling in my mind!
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