As first light breaks
Over the mountains
I hear the birds sing
In the silence of dawn
The dew on the grass lays
Like crystal droplets of light
But my love sleeps on …
Whilst I walk in the world
The lake is so placid,
The wind softly whispers,
A new day has come …
Yet so few will see it.
I walk in the birdsong
On an empty path at dawn
No one but me and them
In this golden hour of calm.
I wrote this for WDBWP’s Poetry Prompt # 8 hosted by Oloriel…sorry I’m late! And I’m also sorry it’s not a true ode…odes always defeat me!
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No worries about being late, Bastet, I just posted the results due to having an all day shenenigence fest with my son 🙂
The poem is enchanting, I especially liked this part:
“The dew on the grass lays
Like crystal droplets of light
But my love sleeps on …
Whilst I walk in the world”
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Thannks Oloriel, appreciate your fine comment…and I’m going to look up what a shenenigence fest is…sounds interesting.
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It’s every naughty possible thing you can concieve in your brain done by a 2 year old from 6 am to 16h 🙂
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Ah…been to several of those 😀
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THAT is really beautiful, a stunning read x
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Thanks Justine…appreciate your loving comment! x
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🙂
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