spring sunshine
warming yon sea gull’s wings
a cold wind blows
fly above the world
into the warmth of springtime
villagers sleeping
§
one last flight
into the sun past the night
alone
Haiku Horizon – Sunday Prompt: Fly
spring sunshine
warming yon sea gull’s wings
a cold wind blows
fly above the world
into the warmth of springtime
villagers sleeping
§
one last flight
into the sun past the night
alone
Haiku Horizon – Sunday Prompt: Fly
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oh i was smling at that then it was a bit sad 😦
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yeah…that the tricky thing about haiku…
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Loved the idea of the seagulls. It made me think about the beach. Loved the imagery your words evoked. ♥
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Thanks Kathy for reading … it’s beach time! ❤
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Very brilliant Haiku.
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Thanks, I’m happy you liked it!
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beautiful words well woven ! love your classic style !
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I like the classical style though I sometimes try the others now too. I’m glad you enjoyed the haiku!
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yes i really enjoyed it . pl have a look at my ”fly” ! trying for the same ….
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I always hope to be able to go and read everyone’s contributions…I must say, your haiku story was very nice indeed!
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thanks Bastet ! thanks for the encouragement !
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🙂
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(y)
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I wake up early so I don’t miss a single bird flying by my window in the morning. Lovely set on flying!
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Ah WabiSabi…I know what you mean…the morning is a blessing full of beauty. Good for you!
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what a nice set!!
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Thanks!
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The “one last flight” has a mystical feeling to it.
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Thanks Alice, that one came straight from my muse and was a last second addition.
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I’m glad you listened to your muse for that one. It’s pure inspiration… the breath of the muse is in it. 🙂
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Thanks Alice I really agree with you, though not in a true haiku form, I really liked it so let it stand! 🙂
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A good poem is a good poem.
I’m not certain there is a “true haiku form” in English, anyhow. I don’t know how to compare Japanese language poetry and syllable counting to the English language.
I like the counting, though. It forces me to say what I want to say more carefully and cleanly. 🙂
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That one last flight just might be the most difficult…
Fly and Shadows
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Ah yes…could very well be. I loved your haiku, a really hot number 😉
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