Dawn Thoughts – July 3, 2014

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Haiku
like a painting
pixels create illusions
homage to Seurat

Tanka
early morning write
words inspired by many
each keystroke creates
thoughtful expressions
impressions joyfully gained

Shadorma
what went wrong
the words seemed so right
unread verse
unreadable?
my poor prodigal poem
languishes in internet*

(I wrote a long poem yesterday, which did not meet with much success,  so I’ll be going over it to see what’s wrong with it and do some editing.)

2 thoughts on “Dawn Thoughts – July 3, 2014

    • Thanks … I’ve made it private to look at it calmly … yes, it needs work! I like how you read my ku … most are this light brush strokes that give an impression, or at least should be! 😉

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