Haiku
peach colored sky
breath of wind in the morn
loud crow cawed
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innovations
changes to be made
recreating
feelings of vitality
that’s slowly slipping
out of my life
as routine
crushing isolation
suffocate me …
time to move on
though I hate to burn bridges
don’t want to close doors
so many have closed
in my life time
that yet another
makes me cry
but … I know
that without endings
there can be no
innovations
Kyoka
useless illusions
of my importance …
silly ego trip
dance and sing instead of cry
frogs croak, crows caw and things change
wow how heart rendering that is so sad 😦
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Sorry, didn’t men to make you sad!
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it’s ok, art is art emotions are good 😀
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Darn … I really should edit before I hit the reply button! Thanks Justine for your understanding 🙂
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🙂
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Love the haiku! (of course…)
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🙂 my favorite haiku fan! Thanks Barb!
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So sad, those closing doors and shaky bridges — but sometimes much better things are on the other side. Here’s to positive innovations and brighter days. [hugs]
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Yes, that’s what the ending was supposed to mean of course! Having lead a nomadic life as a youngster, I really have a lot of difficulties leaving behind me that which no longer is viable. I raise my glass to you! Cin cin .. to innovations and brighter days! xxx
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Na zdrowie!
Always brighter days ahead. 🙂
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Of course!
winter shrouds
tattered by soft spring rain fall
jasmin blossoms
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scattered across the sky
admitting the sun’s approach
butterfly clouds
warm their golden wings at dawn
before taking flight
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circling the pristine skies
seeking their summer nest
eternal wanderers
seeking a new haven
joyous swallows
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raucous splashes of bird song /
sparkling and glistening /
bouncing swallow wings – /
an endless river of sky /
and stones, skipping //
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I’m going to put this in today’s Dawn thoughts if you don’t mind as a renga with my haiku.
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Sounds great!
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Sorry I disappeared for a bit — !
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No problem – I do it all the time
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🙂
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