Lovers – Laturne
Bright
Lovers
Far apart
They longingly
Sigh
A laturne is a shape micropoem … it resembles a Japanese lantern and has 5 lines. The syllable count is 1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – 1. I tried it out yesterday on Poet’s Corner where Harry put it up as a challenge!
A great representation of a Laturne.
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Thanks Der Erzahler!
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Very sweet, I think it matches the picture and the sentiment perfect.
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Thanks Oloriel.
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The photo and poem are wonderful together! And lanternes are so much fun to write — I wrote a series once to accompany Van Gogh’s Night Cafe. It’s a very useful form!
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Yep … and think it would be cool to use as a closing for a haibun … a latbun maybe 😉
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VERY nice — you should do it! 🙂
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Yipes! And have the purists try to purge me … seriously though I just might! (Light Bulb Flashes) Let’s make a challenge between us, whatcha say? 🙂
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Sounds good!
This time mine ends with a haiku (senryu) — but next time I’ll do something different like a lanterne. 🙂
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Interesting!
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🙂
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