Today for Carpe Diem’s Haiku Kai Special, I’m going to write a Fibo-Ku based on a Fibonacci Sequence … if anyone remembers a Fibonacci is a mathematical sequence … 1 – 1 – 2 – 3 – 5 – 8 – 13 … as you can see the sequence is created by adding the numbers that precedes each other:
1 + 1= 2 … 2+1 = 3 … 3+2 = 5 etc.
Chévrefeuille for the Special calls this a Febo-Ku … obviously the syllable count will be 1 + 1 + 2 + 3 + 5 + 8 etc … This is Chèvrefeuille’s Fibo-Ku:
sun
moon
star light
the breeze
this summer morning
birds singing their beautiful songs –
young sparrows playing hide and seek in the dry sand of the garden
© Chèvrefeuille
Here’s my try at another Fibo-Ku…
black
cat
saunters …
the alley,
stinks of rotting trash
dark – dank … refuse of ages past
innocent, the cat generates mad fearful feelings
its life represents humanity’s superstitious fears of forgotten memories.
© G.s.k. ’14
Both are interesting, but I have to confess that I like the images of light and song in the first one. Yours is kind of dark and scary for a Sunday morning read.
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So is our weather …. >:-(
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Great. I love the earthy realism of yours. I must have a go at this form!
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Do it’s not half bad as forms go! 🙂 Glad you liked it.
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Have blogged my first attempt today – and linked to your post here. 🙂
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Cool … will go and look at it now!
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I love that form and how you worked with it. I used to have a black kitty.
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Glad you liked it … it is interesting.
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The black cat – great representation of the dark side.
Hope it’s a good day for you 🙂
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In the end got through it with little damage … today’s another day.
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Really liking this Georgia — we used to have a black cat named “Bones” years ago. A wonderful creature. Part Siamese, too, we think — he meowed backwards — quite a hunter — and quite a lover too! o.O
This is the dark, gritty side of “Stray Cat Strut” and I love it 🙂
Brava!
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Glad you enjoyed it .. I liked the idea of the black cat probably because I was listening to the piece that I put on the blog …
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It was a great piece of music too – I’d never heard it before 🙂
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Me either … I was looking for easy listening stuff and that came up. Love to go after new stuff.
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To combat the sadness the Leonard Cohen piece brought me (I’m a sucker for punishment) I sought out some Miriam Makeba …. have you heard her before? If not, there’ll be some new stuff coming your way once the cardinal piece gets written. (Bribing the muses with chocolate and flattery as we speak.)
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Love Miriam Makeba … and I may be a glutton for punishment but wasn’t up to Leonar Cohen …
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Finally got the post done — and I am so tired — but she’s going online tomorrow night (along with her wildlife buddies) 🙂
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Yeah!!!
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A double rich chocolate with nuts maybe … and of course you’ve got such a lovely prolific muse ….
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Oooooh…. can I share with the muse???
😉
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Oh most definately.
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Awesome … i had some ‘scary’ feelings to introduce this ‘Fibo-ku’, but i think you did a great job on it. Glad you took the challenge. Great Fibo-ku.
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It was fun … but I think in future I’ll work it so’s not to have a 21 syllable line 😉
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Looking forward to that Fibo-ku 🙂
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Hmmmm … 🙂
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Oh I love both, Georgia! The light feel of hte first and dark of the last one…I like to write dark to get it out…Now I have to have a go at this form
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Have a go … it’s an interesting form … but I’m not going to try for those long verses anymore I think.
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