First of all let’s look at Chèvrefeulle’s haiku examples:
Orion’s Belt
brighter than ever
in a moonless night
in a moonless night
wandering over the heath –
the Milky Way
the Milky Way
a path of thousand stars –
like a river
© Chèvrefeuille
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vastness of space
the void inside man’s soul
reflected
ant’s in a row
voyage through the universe
running on the gravel
infinite stars
a tiny creature’s wonder
– being
the galaxy turns
in an infinite voyage
through our universe
© G.s.k. ’14
Each verse takes you to a higher level…that was my experience, Georgia. The first two though…wow! I have fleeting thoughts about this prompt…still not sure…but really enjoyed yours and Chèvrefeuille’s too:)
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The Univers fascinate me … it’s so grounding!
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I love the perspective from the ants to the universe, Bastet, so tight and concise and so immense all at once! ❤❤❤;^)
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I do so love to contemplate the universe! Thanks Aisha for passing by twice today! Hug hugs. Bastet
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My pleasure definitely! ♥♥♥ ;^)
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you rule! 😉
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Well … I am an Egitian Diety of course …. 😉 Bastet.
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haahaahaahaa!
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What a honor to see my haiku on your weblog Georgia. And what a gorgeous response on ‘universe’ … thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for the inspiration! The honor has really been mine 🙂
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This is absolutely wonderful — I can see Carl Sagan nodding his approval — as do I! A wonderful voyage from nothingness to the tiny to the infinite. Brava!
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Thanks dear Jen … to think you both enjoyed this post makes me smile! My mind boggles before the very idea of the Universe … from the infintely small to the vast unimaginable void … maybe I was able to translate that in this series! 🙂
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I think you succeeded admirably.
This really makes me think of his “Pale Blue Dot”.
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Wow … now that is a compliment! Thanks Jen.
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Funny I’ve the impression I’ve answered this … Thanks so much Jen … life is a wonderful voyage!
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Um…. yup … deja vu!
Well, I still like your series — another weird WP hiccup I guess 😉
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