Mindlovesmisery’s Tale Weaver’s Prompt this week isn’t an easy post to look at. The photograph sent shivers up my spine and the piece by Metallica – One – which is perhaps my favorite piece by that group makes my blood run in a cold anger. I read Girlgoyle’s “For Democracy” and wrote a free verse poem in the comments of her post .. which I’ve edited here for this post …. thanks for the inspiration.
This phrase is the back-bone of both Girgoyle’s and my response:
“For democracy, any man
would give his only begotten son.”
— Johnny Got His Gun, 1971
Hand on your heart
sing your song of freedom
send your son marching
into Gehenna today …
you let him pay …
The price required
for your so-called sacred ideal …
planted in your brain,
by the unholy oligarch
you let him pay
… is your name Abraham?
just let me say,
God never took that sacrifice,
demons take your son today
you let him pay …
“Each man faces death alone”
lost in your sacrifice
into the valley of death,
your son walked believing you …
you let him pay …
Thanks for the link 🙂
Your having added the extra emphasis on “him” is a great extra touch —
A powerful poem – even extemporaneous – and I’m so glad you shared it with everyone. 🙂
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Thanks J … these sorts of poems sometimes create a flap … but I don’t think this one will.
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No — what can a person say? Because it’s right on target. And if it does … ah well …
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You’re right of course … and who cares.
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Still… We worry though. Can’t help it! 😉
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Sigh … yes. I’ve stopped looking at my stats .. too depressing.
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[hugs!]
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chilling words – very timely and thought provoking
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Thanks … chilling prompt.
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“God never took that sacrifice”…wow! gut punch…that’s all I can say.
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Thanks … i was happy about that line myself.
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