This haiga, which I put on this blog page today, is part of 30DOH (though I’ll write another lighter one for Through the Eye of Bastet) … is born from my former post of a photo I used for Silent Sunday last week. Commenters suggested that it had the makings of a poem or a haiga (so I wrote both) … it’s also a second answer to the Tale Weaver’s Prompt – which this week was based on a song by Metallica – One – which always affects me very deeply.
winds of war gather
fires are burning in their breasts
mothers weep at dawn
(c) G.s.k. ’14
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the newspaper’s glare
their front page banner
“the enemy marches
the bad men are killing
save our mighty nation
keep our life-style pure
god’s on our side
no one can stop us
people give your children
to the cause of peace”
… and the king was in his counting house
counting out his money …
(c) G.s.k. ’14
Oh wow Georgia this is perfect for the prompt, I was deeply effected by your words, there is something so stark about the way this strips away all the illusions we have about freedom and our government
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Thanks Yves … the poem could have been about any country in the world and just about any time too. We are just so manipulated by others and so complacently follow whatever we’re told.
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You are absolutely right Georgia
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Kind of sad though, isn’t it.
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It is very sad indeed
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great stuff – the haiga is chilling and the last couple of lines of your poem are brilliant .
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Thanks … I like ending the poem with the famous nursey rhyme (sing a song of six-pense)
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Yes I recognised and thought it was a brilliant use of it – sometimes using a known quote works well other times it becomes a cliche. This is one of those times when it is perfect thing to use. 🙂
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Thanks … I was a tad worried about the cliche aspect, but then it just seemed so right there. Thanks for the feedback!
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Wow….
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Thanks!
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Chilling — both the haiga and the poetry. Always the king is counting his money …. no matter what country you live in – while the poor and the young are dying. Very, very well done.
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Thanks … the poem was called by the haiga … couldn’t resist.
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Why should you? Indulge that muse 😉
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🙂 of course … she needs to earn her living!
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😉
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Unnerving to say the least, but that haiga stands alone…very powerful!
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It was a somber photograph .. it inspired the haiku. I’m sorry it unnerved a bit but happy you found it powerful.
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Excellent writing on this one!
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Thanks.
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