under the moon scythe
greeting the Indian summer
– the screech of an owl
indian summer –
sunset red like the grape vines
another leaf falls
hot afternoon
autumn sun sets in the west
chilling the valley
ah – drizzling rain
complaining blackbirds calling
wake-up the dawn
These are all gorgeous — but I like your first haiku the best — it has a great haiku moment and feel to it.
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I agree with you … I to think it was the best one.
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Great series, Georgia…the first and last one are my favs
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Thanks … trying to keep up the morning waka/haiku traditions 🙂
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Your morning traditions are like a beautiful wake up prayer.
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Thanks dear heart … that makes me smile a lot …
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