Here in the olive grove,
I in a brown mood,
Hear your soliloquy;
You could be a winged Hamlet
Despairing your fate …
No bright songs do you sing now
Only long chittering complaints
Laments reft of promise
As autumn grows older
And colder …
Or is it just me,
My own autumn blues,
That attributes to you
My rook-colored friend,
A sadness you know not.
(Your insouciance to seasons proverbial –
You fear not the winter cold …)
Perhaps yours is exultation –
The call of the hunter!
“Come one, come all
There’s food in abundance!
The swallows are gone … and
All those pesky summery tourists …
The insects grow bold
Look as they come out of hiding…
I spy … spiders and flies …
Ah how lovely in autumn.”
Oh my sweet blackbird,
Dearest totem of freedom,
I love you so well!
I could listen for hours
To your seasonal calls …
I imagine you’re to me,
A portal of happiness,
With your resonant tones.
No, no lament is your autumn song
It’s an invitation:
Find the good things of autumn …
Find happiness and peace.
(c) G.s.k. ’14
Your gorgeous poem lifted my brown mood and tempted me to sing Hallelujah. Please may share it on facebook, and keep a copy to enjoy again?
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Of course Vivi … I’d be pleased if you shared and kept a copy. I’m happy it helped you too get out of a brown mood 🙂
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I love the mention of an olive grove!
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Thank you … we’re surrounded by olive groves … and the birds, not only the black birds love the place.
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I thought blackbirds sing in the dead of night and octopii tend gardens and John or Paul is the Walrus (although these days Ringo looks like one) and they live in a yellow submarine.
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LOL … I don’t know about Beatle blackbirds but here in Italy they tend to sleep at night 🙂 Loved your comment and I’m sure that we all live in a yellow submarine!
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How beautiful.! Full of positive energy. 🙂
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Thanks Payal … I’m happy you found it so. 🙂
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Nice…fits my mood just now.
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Glad you’re in a good mood! 🙂
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Ohmigosh I think this is my favourite autumnal poem I have seen AT ALL! I love, love LOVE it! I felt like I was inside your head, hearing echoes of my own thoughts and attitudes 😀
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Thanks a lot for your enthusiastic comment! 🙂 Happy autumn!
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Your blackbird is so full of hope. Thanks for linking up.
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Thanks for welcoming me!
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So beautifully hopeful Georgia — and at points it made me smile — as in when he was playing “I spy – spiders and flies” — 😀
Just lovely —
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I was sure you’d like the spiders and the flies dialogue … Issa influences even in western poetry – 🙂
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Issa doesn’t like to be boxed up … much like his spiders and critters he likes to creep through the cracks and invade the rest of the world 😉
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LOL … nice comment and I agree. He’d have loved to have been inspiring … did you notice the cricket in the Eliot poem —- 😉
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And rat’s feet! 🙂
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yep … 🙂 Haiku does great things to writing poetry!
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