plus: melancholy, death, renewal, harvest, change (for OctPoWriMo)
In the name of whom should we speak,
to whom raise these goblets of blood?
This is a broken melancholy age
though to some vital, in a sense .
Here lie, strips of blank sheets of paper,
the would be ravaged end of a poem
meant to be a speech, had I written it,
for the season of death – which we call autumn.
Is it possible to change our course …
to harvest love instead of regrets and horror
connected to that whore, we call power ?
Ah – in the eve of my aging existence, I despair.
In the name of whom should we speak,
and to whom raise these goblets of blood?
(c) G.s.k. ’14
OctPoWriMo – Prompts for Day 4 (Protest Poem) and Day 5 (Autumn)
“Is it possible to change our course …
to harvest love instead of regrets and horror”
Powerful lines and piece.
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I don’t know if I’d so much call power the whore as the pimp. Too many are more than willing to shed blood for zir.
We live in frightening times, though it’s not the first time for this sort of thing. The power-mad have always caused misery for others.
http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/10/copyright-fergregory-123rf-stock-photo.html
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Too right you are in stating that ours is not the first (or in my opinion even the worse) period in history that the power-mad have created misery for the majority. Interesting the use of pimp instead of whore .. I think you’re probably right here … it seems more suitable to what I was trying to get across. Thanks for the suggestion and the great comment!
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This gave me shivers and hope all at once!
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Thanks Shanjeniah …
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Well-deserved! =)
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Power packed lines!
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Thanks!
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whoah — this is one of those poems that’s so powerful it sort of leaves you speechless —
“In the name of whom should we speak, // and to whom raise these goblets of blood?”
My new favorite lines of poetry —-
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This comment makes me very happy indeed … as you know, I prefer the liet motif … but I’ve been experimenting and I’m not secure with these subjects as yet …
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