A Gourmet’s Soul – Free Verse – November 17, 2014

StillLifeWithOystersLemonAndBeer

Jose Fernando, Still Life With Oysters, Lemon and Belgian Beer

 

A subtle mix is a gourmet’s soul
His palate is his most erogenous zone –
To taste fresh fish an orgiastic event
That yields great sighs and lingering smiles –
With hints of toasty bits of bread and wine
You’ll have good sex with him anytime –
So don’t despair my darling girl –
Buy him fresh oysters and abalones …

(C) G.s.k. ’14

 

Sunday Whirl words: lingering, fresh, tends, palate, hints, sex, yields, toasty, soul, mix, subtle

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8 thoughts on “A Gourmet’s Soul – Free Verse – November 17, 2014

  1. Great write — and that painting makes me really want a nice, stout Belgian beer. Seriously. There used to be a place in Hagerstown called the Washington Spy — had more types of beer than you can shake a stick at — and the Belgians were awesome. Sigh. Miss that place.

    I’m have Belgian tastes in a Pabst Blue Ribbon neighborhood. 😦

    Love how you handled this Wordle. 🙂

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  2. great poem.
    I like how you where you took the words and melded them into a gourmet’s sexualized palate. Especially delicious was the last two lines:
    “So don’t despair my darling girl –
    Buy him fresh oysters and abalones …”

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    • Thanks .. it was a pleasure to use these words to create my little ditty … of course the word sex pushed the whole poem in a particular direction … Glad you enjoyed it!

      Like

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