and the night streams in
from east to west, traveling
in time with the moon
© Tomas Tranströmer
Today’s special is to write a haiku in the “same tone, sense and spirit” but it is also the second day of the vision quest, so we must look for and express the inner spiritual meaning we receive from the haiku as well:
and as the moon sets
the train rumbles eastward
seeking the dawn
© G.s.k. ’14
Linked to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
I feel the deeper meaning … the dawn … a new day rises. Seeking for new ways to find enlightment … great …!
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Thanks so much … a great inspirational poem.
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I like this a lot.. yes there is an inner meaning I can work with.. great one Georgia.
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Thanks Bjorn … glad you found the inner meaning!
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I like this, Cara and can feel the rumble under my feet:) earth shattering perhaps
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Hope not earth shattering … but trains certainly do rumble and bring on many changes 😉
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very nicely done!
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Thanks Dolores!
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Very nicely done, Georgia!
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Thanks Jan!
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