what is paradise
looking up into the sky
the universe twinkles
black material – star-dust
but not paradise
cherry blossoms in spring-time
delicious and sweet
their petals in the wind fall
inspiring poets
so delightful for the soul
but not paradise
the waterfall burbles bright
its waters – laughter
a song like angels voices
but not paradise
a lovers embrace – warming
hearts in harmony
both peaceful and exalting
but not paradise
ah! an instant there and gone
formless – beyond perception
(c) G.s.k. ’14
Linked to: Carpe Diem Haiku Kai – Paradise
Brilliant Georgia —
I’ve been sitting here forever – struggling – “what is paradise” – and not getting anywhere. Very nicely done —
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LOL … guess who else was sitting here struggling … I could come up with a cute haiku but nothing short of a choka satisfied me 😉 … though I’ll try something else over at The Waka Library.
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Nice one, Georgia!
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Thanks Sue! 🙂
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But what is paradise to you? Lovely poem 🙂 x
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Ah .. There’s the rub said the Bard … the last two lines tells you something about what I think about paradise … beyond words and imagination 🙂
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hehe yes i thought so but im nosy so like to ask anyway hehe x
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🙂
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I love this and can so relate…moments in time, memories sublime…paradise here, paradise lost (not Milton’s) brava, cara…reading it is soothing and conjures up my perfect moments.
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Thanks …
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Beautiful!!!
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Thanks!
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Treasured words
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Very moving.
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Thanks!
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I agree absolutely. I have no conception of paradise beyond those accidental moments of joy that arrive out of nowhere. A well-worded response to the prompt 🙂
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Thanks Blake … glad you could agree .. or maybe not .. but glad you enjoyed the choka.
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