serene
dark empty nights
swirling curling around my mind
without you
here
lonely
dark empty nights
dancing in a sea of blue light
gracefully
dream
asleep
dark empty nights
dreaming in shades of serene blue
in velvet
chains
the dawn
bright new morning
reveals infinite new shades
blue darkness
fades
G.s.k. ‘15
Random syllables: 2/4/8/3/1
* in velvet chains
Love that
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Thanks glad you liked it!
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I love the way it rings when you read it aloud… downbeat, but hopeful.
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This is lovely Georgia, you use some descriptive language to create some beautifully vivid images.
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Thanks Michael … glad you enjoyed the experiment!
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So very nice and “blue darkness fades” is such a good ending.
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Thanks.. 🙂
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lovely poem, Bastet 🙂 *dreaming in shades of serene blue
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Thanks 🙂
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Great stuff — the form really echoes the painting — and adds to the ebb and flow so nicely.
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Thanks … experimenting again … 😉
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