summer wind
daily playing in the valley
dancing trees and grass
summer wind
blows off the lake at noon-time
cool siesta
daily playing in the valley
Garda’s wind-song
whispering rhapsody
dancing trees and grass
bow and sway from noon to dusk
lords and ladies
© G.s.k. ‘15
Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Special # 127
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You always create such mental vistas in your work.
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LOL … cool comment, so much more creative then “I like your imagery” 🙂
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Hahahhahahahaha– I was gonna say that. 😀
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So glad you didn’t 😀
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Ah (sigh) lovely cara, that second stanza leaves me breathless…whispering rhapsody…quel après-midi rempli de tendresse.
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Thanks you dear … I love the word rhapsody and was a pleasure to use it.
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The second haiku just gets at me. 🙂 Simply great work.
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I’m happy you enjoyed it Justine!
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There’s such a playfulness here, Georgia — especially the lords and ladies 🙂
“lords and ladies” sounded vaguely familiar — I didn’t realize it’s another name for “jack in the pulpit” — this is another great image as I remember a vast creekside valley from my childhood that was full of the plants swaying in the breeze from the creek.
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