seeking winter greens
even with the emperor
at dawn
Japanese New Year
after burning ornaments
winter greens with rice
New Year ritual
burning the ornaments
binding the gods
smoke carries good fortune
closing the fifth season
© G.s.k. ‘14
We’ve been exploring the fifth season (New Year) kigo at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai … this is two prompts in one … burning the ornaments (Sagichoo) which is the ritual closure of New Year, burning the ornaments fix the Gods to the New Year … and Picking Young Greens (wakanatsumi) … please go visit Carpe Diem for more information about these and many other rituals tied to the Japanese New Year!
Happy Japanese New Year — I want sticky rice, please. 🙂
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Wish I were Japanese .. all these prompts about the Japanese New Year are a bit much … still I’ll sent you some virtual mocha with jam! 🙂
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Yeah— now, you’re talking. 🙂
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😀
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Great job of mixing the two prompts—sort of like a moveable feast! 😉
Picking Tender Greens
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Kinda .. got to do what you can when your connection is a temperamental as mine is …
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Excellent haiku and tanka Georgia … you have intwined two prompts and created a beauty.
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I’m so happy you didn’t mind that I put the prompts together .. I’m having difficulties connecting lately so it was easier fro me this way … Thanks so much for your enthusiastic comment and the reblog!
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Reblogged this on Chèvrefeuille's haiku and commented:
Awesome haiku and tanka …
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Love the fifth season!
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Yes, lovely isn’t it! 🙂
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I really like the ’emperor’ haiku – the scene you paint is so simple, yet vivid and suggests all sorts of possibilities for a back story.
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Thanks Blake … there really is a story behind it … the Emperor of Japan wrote a tanka about gathering those lovely green plants.
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Ah that explains it! I’m still ‘new’ to the haiku/tanka world, so it’s good to learn about historical references.
And I think you alluded to the history very effectively here.
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🙂 thanks Blake … glad you enjoyed it … I actually got the information from the prompt about the green veggies, I would never have known about the tanka otherwise.
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Ah I missed that prompt – I’ll check it out now, thanks 😉
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I mixed prompts in this post .. didn’t have a lot of time to do individual posts … but the links should be here.
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