cold winter morning
tea rose’s perfection
spider’s web
© G.s.k. ‘15
This week on Haiku Shuukan we begin a new spiritual journey, let me quote our host:
” … I have found a new “spiritual” series of prompts starting this week with “I have managed to reach perfection”.
This sentence is from the short novel “The Way of the Bow” by Paulo Coelho. In this novel he describes the spiritual path of the Bow, the Japanese art of archery. This sentence is said by a man who challenges Tetsuya, the most important character in this novel, to shoot the bow with him.”
I’m inclined to believe that perfection doesn’t exist … in the sense that something that cannot be improved, which of course is the meaning of perfection, doesn’t exist. But we can try to look for a relative perfection … always considering that in this world of constant change that perfection will be gone with a blink of the eye. So I’m looking at perfection as a relatively perfect moment.
I took th photograph of the above rose a week ago. It was really very nearly a perfect shot in the sense that the rose came out beautifully … of course the photo isn’t perfect because the background is not very pretty and to work around this I’d have to cut the rose out and superimpose it onto a better background. I decided that I would monochrome the photo and see what would happen – whilst I was looking at it in my editor, I noticed for the first time a tiny spiderweb among its leaves… an imperfection right? Well obviously not from the spider’s point of view! So I decided that that spiderweb would be my idea of perfection … a beautiful rose which also gives hospitality to a spider one cold winter morning.
It is perfect, cara!! the tireless spiders are here all year round aren’t they? I love that photo…just stunning!!!
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Thanks .. I’m happy you enjoyed them both! I’m a little off of my writing today … kind of sluggish.
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I loafed in bed until 7pm and thankfully my son took me out for a bit and we had dinner.
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When it’s cold and dark outside it’s so easy to just go blah … happy you son dropped around to take you out!
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Isn’t it interesting how layers of beauty slowly reveal themselves ? 🙂
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Yes .. and that is another way of looking at perfection.
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The silky softness of the flower petal and the threads of a spider… a beautiful combination.
Brings warm memories. Wonderful photo. 🙂
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Thanks dear Jules … and it’s crazy to think that a day later we had a snow storm!
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Too cold to snow here… it was 10 F this morning now it is 25 F or -12 C up to -3 C.
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Nasty nasty weather … we’ve been surrounded by snow and snow storms the last few days … down in our valley with that big lake we’re getting wind and rain … it’s kind of like being in the eye of a storm here, looking at the weather happen all around us.
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There could be a poem or two in that 😉
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There could be something in that … even a story .. we were looking at the half snowed mountain side yesterday. Half way up there are two houses, in their back yard it was white with what looked like snow but in the front it was brownish and muddy!
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Kind of like when it rains in the front of the house but it is still sunny in the back. – the weather has an imaginary line that is quite real 🙂
It is interesting to see rain clouds from across a distance.
You can see the dark cloud and the silver slant of rain. We saw several like that when we visited the Grand Canyon in Arizona. But most of the rain actually never made it to the ground because it was to hot it turned to steam first.
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You created perfection with your words. 🙂
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Aw shucks … thanks Celestine!
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I believe in perfection and this hits it. Layers of beauty and at the heart, a home for a tiny spider in a beautiful rose. Nice start to my day.
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Thanks so much Kanzen! A fantastically wonderful compliment!
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Thank you for a fantastically wonderful haiku. It was a joy.
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Wow … thanks for reading dear!
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The photo is lovely in the monochrome. It then focuses on the rose and not the picture as a whole.
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Yes it worked out going monochrome as I was hoping …
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Such a beautiful photo – and you’ve honored the rose’s hospitality towards the spider! 😀
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Thanks Jen … I was really taken with that tiny spider’s web … he (or they) were very discreet!
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It’s always great to find a hidden surprise in a photo — like this autumn when I discovered a teeny “bird” in the clouds at sunset — (clouds shaped like a bird) — felt like a huge gift. Perhaps it was. 🙂
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I think you’re right about them being a gift! This one certainly felt like one!
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