Morning Haiku and Waka – February 10, 2015

OLYMPUS DIGITAL CAMERAthe golden hour
standing on the shore dreaming
wisps of wind calling

ducks, coots a gull’s pass
in the stillness a sparrow
the sun bids farewell

a lonely soul
sings a sunset Pavane
lake winter sunset

the evening bay
ripples of light in water
first stars appear

a winter sunset
inside a desolate soul
beauty’s memory
and maybe time’s passage
is a game played by gulls

G.s.k. 15

 

Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai’s … Sunset … over a harbour

14 thoughts on “Morning Haiku and Waka – February 10, 2015

    • Glad you enjoyed it Hank … I do so love sunsets … and that one came out particularly interesting. Thanks for the comment and yes freedom is the ultimate goal! Georgia.

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  1. I really love the “wisps of wind calling” – so tender and open to interpretation; and the game of gulls at the end. A real journey, with some wonderful lines.

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