The Chatelaine
She was a living symbol of elegance, like a renaissance castle but covered in a soft purple shawl.
Hidden deeply, was the dungeon where her soul shrivelled imprisoned, the oubliette opened onto an unused courtyard, where none ever came and the sun rarely shone.
Her rippling dark hair was like an improvised canal of moonlit water, flowing down her shoulders, reminding one man of holy scripture and another of a lovely piece of erotic poetry.
Her smile, never syrupy, never reached her eyes, looked upon the world, a petition for love, a request for a paddle that would guide the tiny canoe of her heart, severely dented by love’s disappointments, into serenity.
When she died, young and alone, one god looked upon her, he mourned her passing passionately and so transformed her into a willow that looked eternally out to sea, silently calling to lost lovers guiding them to the safety of her shores.
© G.s.k. ‘15
Mindlovesmsery’s Menagerie’s wordle contains 12 words: Canal,Ripple. Elegance, Shawl, Scripture, Improvise, Baggage, Oubliette (a secret dungeon with an opening in the ceiling), Syrup, Dent, Paddle, Petition
🙂 Lovely- great write
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Thanks …
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Breath-taking! Astonishing! Truly beautiful and moving. Well done 😀
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Thanks very much indeed! 🙂
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Beautiful in life, beautiful in death. Delightful.
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Thanks … I think 🙂
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So sad yet so beautiful, the deepest things are often the sad and beautiful ones… (I don’t know if I’m making any sense, my brain isn’t as functional as it usually is :p )
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Of course you’re making sense … seems that you’ve caught onto something, often sad things are beautiful … and becomes poet/writer fodder 😉
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I had to look up fodder, it’s an interesting word thanks for teaching it to me! I’m relieved to find out that I can still make sense after two days (6 hours then 4 hours) of exams
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Oh my dear … you’re marvellous … it’s a wonder you haven’t swooned away .. and I’m happy you learnt a new word … that’s always fun!
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Thank god I haven’t swooned away I still have 8 more hours tomorrow that I haven’t revised for yet 😂
Yes I love learning new words! ^^
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🙂
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Wow omg that is truly beautiful you are an amazing writer I’m just dazzled
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WOW … thanks so much Justine … wish you were an editor 😉
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hah now thats a compliment back, always like that..grinzzz…My ficitonal story writing prompt came out this week, do you have time to join me perhaps? hehe
Here is the link if you might find it of interest:
http://eclecticoddsnsods.com/2015/02/10/eclectic-corner-6-story-photography-prompt/
Ps Happy Valentines to you xx
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Thanks … and it was a lovely Valentines day … hope yours was great too! 🙂
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Lovely work.
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Oh, VERY nice!!! A story of lost love, wrapped in mythology and metaphor. The details are wonderful – the smile that doesn’t reach the eyes, the hair like a canal of moonlit water.
And again — how to praise that photo without going overboard? Awesome.
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Thanks … what a lovely compliment!!! To tell the truth I wasn’t too sure about this piece. I was surprised that it got much of a read actually .. 🙂
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It’s different from your norm, but different in a good way. 🙂
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