plunk plunk plunk a drip
somewhere in the icy fog
echoes
yet another bridge
passing a dark dank alley
as Venice sleeps
morning gulls screeching
night’s fishing boats return
the Grand Canal
© G.s.k. 15
along the canals
dawn shimmers on the water
pigeons cooing
sloshing gondolas
sleep in the Venetian dawn
dawns early lights
pink with golden highlights
no Carnival or tourists
swirling ’round me
the fog muffles everything
but the smell of rot
© G.s.k. 15
Venice is a city in decay. Centuries ago, the first settlers created Venice as a way to avoid the marauders that were flowing into the Italian peninsula. The experiment grew, the known technology created this beautiful city of canals linking hundreds islands and artificial islands connected by hundreds of bridges in the middle of a marshy lagoon. It’s often been on the brink of sinking. It’s foundation is an interesting mix of wooden pylons and muck. Modern technology is trying to save Venice from sinking permanently … its population though has been greatly reduced due to the difficulties of living in a city that’s often flooded by high tide. For more information about Venice click this LINK.
Today’s at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai artist for today’s inspiration is a little known Russian impressionist named Sapozhnikova Svetlana … a lovely touch she has indeed.
I wonder if they will be able to save Venice I would love to visit. As I said to Jen the words are a lovely slice of Venice x
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Seems that the MOSE … http://www.hydrauvision.com/en/news/19/venice-saved-from-ruin.html … we can only hope … It’s really helped that the UN has listed it as a World Heritage Site.
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Great stuff — SO many senses touched on here — and you used repetition too — I’m proud of you! 😀
It seems like it would be lovely for a visit — but so many difficulties there — haven’t read your link but *mold* would have to be at the top of the list. Uck.
It begins and ends on an ominous note. A much different depiction of Venice — and I love it. (The waka. Not that Venice is sinking, of course.)
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Completely understand … unfortunately Venice has big problems … but I’d still like to stay there for a time. My joints and bones would hate me for that .. esp in the winter … really humid, but the silence … that is no cars or traffic just people … is so cool. The summer is a bane because of all the tourists of course, but heaven’s we’ve got tourists here too … they are “bread and butter” so one must be indulgent.
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I can so much feel that you have been there.. so much more than just a romantic dream.. yet all is there including the ice of winter.
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And I see you must know her too … she’s beautiful … but yes sometimes icy cold! 🙂
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BTW was nice seeing you after your long absence! 🙂
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Ah.. I will drop in from time to time.. so much to handle at the other sites.
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I can imagine … something has to give from time to time ..
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Nice write!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Although I’ve never been to Venice, it seems to me that you’ve captured a Venetian morning.
Digging a Channel
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Thanks Mark … the paintings and memories helped a lot.
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Each so good they merit their own space.
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I agree, they should be on their own … I wish I had enough material to make an e-book …
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Love the imagery, the playing on the senses, Georgia
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Thanks Sue ..
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This is wonderful. Your haiku made Venice come alive for me far more than any photo or even the sweet impressionist paintings.
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Wow Thanks so much Suzanne .. that really makes me feel good!
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You make the morning come alive!
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Thanks MMT! What a wonderful thing to say …
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Beautiful writing here! Couldn’t pick a favorite!
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lovely haiku and tanka; thank you for a little slice of Venice
much love…
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Very Welcome Gillena!
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