walking tonight
no streetlights guide our footsteps
dark country road
yet soft shimmering moonlight
surrounds us like fairy dust
© G.s.k. ‘15
Written for Carpe Diem Tanka Shrine
This is the original photo:
walking tonight
no streetlights guide our footsteps
dark country road
yet soft shimmering moonlight
surrounds us like fairy dust
© G.s.k. ‘15
Written for Carpe Diem Tanka Shrine
This is the original photo:
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Beautiful poem.
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Thanks Gigi!
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My goodness, Georgia! I don’t know where to start commenting on this post! The tanka is so dreamy — with dreamy music — but wow, what a beautiful haiga!!! I really like the composition — this is SO good.
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Thanks … I should have put up the original like you did .. the edit was really dramatic! I’m glad you enjoyed the haiku and haiga .. and Adrian von Ziegler is sooooooooo great!
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Yes, you should start doing that — it’s a good teaching tool for everyone — especially with the drastic edits. 🙂
Again — great post!
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Did it ad will have to remember for future to put up the originals … didn’t today either … the funny thing is … when I go back looking for the original, sometimes I can’t find it … I don’t mean that I’ve overwritten it .. never . I just don’t remember where I put the darn folder!
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Can totally relate to that one. It gets complicated!!!
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Wow — now that is a HUGE difference!!!!! You lose the vineyard detail, but you gain a heck of a lot of drama, color-wise. The gamble paid off!!!
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Really is a huge difference, isn’t it … but I’ve go vinyards up the yeya and not many night photos …
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LOL! Yes, I guess you get vineyard fatigue!
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Too right … it’s like those rolling corn fields of Iowa …
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Or the rolling corn fields of Peeay in some places! Though we have more sprawl to break up those cornfields. 😉
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Yep … I prefer to go to the olive groves … woods all around them … but vineyards are a bore …
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Nice work. I am so happy that you are doing tanka.
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I love tanka along with choka … sometimes a single haiku isn’t enough for me and you’ve more liberty with the waka. 🙂
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Great tanka Georgia … a nice serene sphere you have created, but also a bit scary …
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Glad you enjoyed the spooky walk 😉
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