the young couple
skim on the placid lake
courting in spring
skim o’er the water
wind in your ears – fly flip splash
wind surfing at dawn
coffee and skimmed milk
computer booting up
morning rituals
© G.sk. ‘15
This post is linked to Haiku Horizons
a gorgeous scene and words!
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Thanks so much dear Cybele! Glad you enjoyed it!
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Beautiful, beautiful — love how you’ve carried the idea of rituals through the series. 🙂
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Thanks … hadn’t thought about carrying the idea of rituals through the series actually but of course now that I re-read it, that’s what Madame Muse has done! 🙂
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Those muses — clever folk! It’s fun though when people comment on your work and you realize – “hey! that was pretty cool! wish I’d planned it that way!”
Ya gots natural talent, babe!
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Thanks Jen, you’re the best … I think rather than any natural talent I’ve got a vivid subconscious … word association and all that …
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Talent in recognizing the subconscious images and bringing them to light, then. Intertwined. 🙂
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Thanks … cool of you to say so … makes me feel right proud … really though, thanks so much for such a wonderful comment, I loved it (though it made me blush a bit).
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😀 You *should* be proud! 😀
Hoping you’re doing more smiling than blushing. 🙂
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Oh yes .. I’ve got a huge smile stamped on my face in fact! 🙂
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Good! 😀
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A really lovely piece !
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Thanks 🙂 I’m really glad you like it!
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Oh I really enjoyed reading this step by step image of a morining and clever use of the prompt.
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Thanks Clr! The main poem was actually a second thought that became a haiga .. I’m happy you liked it.
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Fave was the coffee and skimmed milk morning ritual. I must be the only female left on the planet who drinks full cream milk and I have the love handles to prove it 🙂
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LOL … alas … even without the full cream I also have some great love handles 😉
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I enjoyed the morning rituals the most. Good work.
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Thanks Alice … it was an interesting word prompt … not as easy as one might think at first.
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You did so well with it.
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Thanks!
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🙂
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