Full Circle in brief – April 25, 2015

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a sunflower bows
in the howling rain storm –
puddles like seas

those tiny beaches
with their small rhythmic waves –
puddles making love

frightened seagulls
screech in the wind-filled rain storm –
lightning and thunder

on the high mountain
a lone red peony grows
nightingale’s lover

© G.s.k. ‘15

 

2dba5-logo2bcd2bfull2bcircle1. sunflower
2. rain storm
3. puddles
4. beach
5. waves
6. making love
7. seagulls
8. rain storm
9. lightning
10. mountain
11. peony
12. nightingale

I didn’t read the prompt carefully so in the first post I actually wrote 12 haiku … here is how the prompt was supposed to be written … sorry, Bastet

14 thoughts on “Full Circle in brief – April 25, 2015

    • Thanks so much Hamish … I was desolate when I found out my error … but I’m happy that it happened, in a way .. glad you enjoyed the last haiku – it was the easiest and my favourite too!

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  1. These are all really good. I particularly like the first one as it reflects my world. In my garden the last sunflower of summer hangs it head forlornly as a wild storm sweeps in from the south – the puddles are like seas down here today.

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