what a nifty hat
thought the guard
as he watched her pass the chain-gang
in her car outside the prison …
sweet cherry red
and bright white tie strings
dangling round her face
enticing – delighting
a real 100 carat beauty …
he looked down at his shoe
his mind began to wander
one idea leading to another ….
a later sequence of thoughts
sure made his blood boil
ah, yes indeed –
what a nifty hat
© G.s.k. ‘15
It wasn’t the hat that was making his blood boil LOL…good use of words and fun poem !
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Do you think Cressida, somehow I think you might be right though 😉
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Ooh deliciously juicy story…somethings are best kept under our hat..apart from nifty stories!
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LOL … cute comment, I liked it very much!
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What a nifty story!
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Thanks Candy … just a few late thoughts … almost missed out on this Whirligig!
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