world of bubbles
floating in the green field
dancing rainbows
through drops of rain
rainbow glistening windows
a summer shower
rain in sunshine
a bridge of vibrant colours
summer rainbow
© G.s.k. ‘15
Summer Rainbows,
just tiny bits of light caught in the water as rain falls through the sunshine.
summer reflections – rainy sunny afternoon – rainbow
© G.s.k. ‘15
For the full post and two very beautiful haiku written by Issa please click on the link below:
Carpe Diem #769 Niji (rainbow)
One-bun invented by Jim Kacian sounds like a bakery order so I’m suggesting we call this extreme form of haibun an ichibun … what do you say 😉 ?
These are so lovely, magical!
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I see you get notifications from my post and happy I am of that … I’d linked Jim Kacian’s page on CDHK instead of my own haiku post by accident! Glad you enjoyed my rainbow series!
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I just use the WP Reader…so I get whatever comes through there.
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Yes, they wouldn’t be linking to CDHK Blogger link … glad I write my Haiku on WP again 🙂
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Yes Ma’am!
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so lovely and whimisical…I love rainbows, brings out the child in me.
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🙂 me too … they are so beautiful!
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Ichibun — much better! 🙂
Very playful 🙂
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Thanks Jen … I suppose though that Jim Kacian as it’s creator will have to decide to change it … though I just might entitle my one-buns like this anyway – BTW reading up on haibun, I found that it has from one line to several and for the Japanese it is still a just a haibun. 😉
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Yes – I remember some one line haibun. The narrower definition sounds like another case of our modern love of making things more difficult than they need to be. 🙂
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Or our piquant taste in giving a name to everything …
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Nice mood, though at first the second one seemed naughty!
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Really? How odd! 🙂
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Wonderful trio of haiku on ranibow Georgia and your one-bun is really awesome. I like that new name you have given it … ichibun … sounds great. I don’t know if Jim would like the idea of changing the name of his invention 🙂
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I know that Jim might not like changing the name of his invention … and haven’t dared ask him as I don’t know him … it was just an idea that popped into my head after having people commenting about bakeries etc 😉 Glad you enjoyed the trio and love Jim’s form, by whatever name!
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