paper screen door
separating the lover’s
from the dawn
summer romance
light filters through the screen
warming their bodies
after the evening showers
the coolness of dawn
behind the screen door
the moaning of a tempest
whispered at dawn
© G.s.k. ‘15
spying the lovers
old amma smiles in thought
remembering –
a long ago adventure
of clouds and rain at dawn
behind the screen door
she combs her hair wistfully
remembering him
his hands and face in her hair
swimming in that moonless sea
© G.s.k. ‘15
Written for:
Carpe Diem #775 Amido (screen door or window screen)
As an introduction to this interesting episode, Chèvrefeuille published these beautiful haiku:
utsukushi ya shôji no ana no ama [no] kawa
looking pretty
in a hole in the paper door…
Milky Way
© Issa
natsu no kaze yarido no kuchi ya togarigoe
summer wind
through the opening of the sliding door –
this piercing sound
© Basho
The Screen Door (Amido)
through the screen door
she watches me watching her
disgracefully thrilling
© Hamish Gunn
sunlight breaks
through the cracks of the torn paper door
shadows play
© Chèvrefeuille
Trying to understand the difference between “shoji” and “amido” I did a little research in Internet (where else!) and discovered that there are four types of sliding doors (if you include windows) in Japan … the “amido” is just like our mesh screen doors. If you want to learn how to repair your “amido” follow this LINK. It helped me discover the difference between the various screen doors and windows of Japan!
Ah so beautiful and so real…lovely images to go to sleep with a goofy smile:)
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lol … thanks so much …
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Really enjoyed this – the sensual imagery – and the cherished memory of a long ago tempest! 🙂
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Thanks so much Huilota … I’m so happy you enjoyed this set!
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I’m partial to that moaning tempest behind the screen! Lovely!
Seeping Through the Screen
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Thanks MMT! 🙂
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Your entries – responses – so beautiful – languid – like the heat of summer – as thin as mesh – yet binding in capturing the essence of light, shadows, heat, coolness, passion – well done Georgia! Really moving. 🙂
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Thanks so much MJ for your wonderfully articulated comment … helps me to understand why the post was appreciated! 🙂
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beautiful summer lovers!! Moments caught in the warm breezes of morning indeed!
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🙂 a very pleasant thought …
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Great exploration of theme – in different styles…sensual, and personal. How’s the Venice project…hope you can take it further…
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Ach … it’s becoming a long hot dull summer … hard to stay at the computer to pick and choose! But thanks for bringing the subject back to mind!
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Wonderful, imaginative haiku, Georgia. My favorites are first and last.
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Thanks glad you enjoyed them! 🙂
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Beautiful series. I loved the Amma’s moonless sea and the tempest whispered at dawn.
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Thanks Brenda .. glad you enjoyed the read!
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You always have such beautiful words, strung like pearls.
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What a lovely thing to say 🙂
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I put up a butterfly poem that was inspired by your butterflies post earlier this month. It took awhile to find time to put it together. The kids and I are having way too much fun! XOXO
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Would love to see that poem … I’ll have to make a search once I’ve a free moment! Glad you’re having fun with the kids you’re wise take advantage of the time you’ve got with them! XOXO!
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No searching required. 🙂 http://friendlyfairytales.com/2015/07/17/butterfly-twilight/
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Thanks ever so much Brenda!
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