Summer Freshness – Haiku/Tanka – July 13, 2015

Posted on July 13, 2015 by Georgia

shadows and depth

lapping waves
swishing of gravel and waves
fresh evening song

fresh evening song
growing shadows on the beach
breeze on the lake

breeze on the lake
cooling summer evening
a boy and a girl

a boy and a girl
walking hand in hand
lost in summer love
listening to the waves
kissing the evening shore

Haiku Horizons – Fresh

26 thoughts on “Summer Freshness – Haiku/Tanka – July 13, 2015”

doveinthedungeon on July 13, 2015 at 06:15 said:

Ah … those sweet summer loves! Such a gentle touch … I like this very much 🙂

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- Bastet on July 14, 2015 at 06:07 said:
  
  Thanks Huilota for your encouragement!
  
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  - doveinthedungeon on July 14, 2015 at 11:02 said:
    
    Very welcome — great work! 🙂
    
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kokilagupta on July 13, 2015 at 09:07 said:

beautiful, romantic and so fresh …..

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- Bastet on July 14, 2015 at 06:19 said:
  
  Thanks Kokilagupta … glad you enjoyed the piece!
  
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readinpleasure on July 13, 2015 at 13:01 said:

Lovely and sweet. 🙂

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Maniparna Sengupta Majumder on July 13, 2015 at 13:16 said:

Beautiful picture and perfect words…. 🙂

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- Bastet on July 14, 2015 at 06:25 said:
  
  Thanks Maniparna!
  
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September Last on July 14, 2015 at 10:40 said:

How beautiful!

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- Bastet on July 15, 2015 at 07:07 said:
  
  Thanks!
  
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magicalmysticalteacher on July 14, 2015 at 16:10 said:

Those fresh evening songs are the most pleasant of all!

Rocky Road/Fresh Winds

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- Bastet on July 15, 2015 at 07:20 said:
  
  🙂 thanks MMT ..
  
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Kalpana solsi on July 14, 2015 at 18:26 said:

Romance blooming .

Cascading haiku and a tanka. Beautiful.

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- Bastet on July 15, 2015 at 07:24 said:
  
  Thanks … 🙂
  
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menons129 on July 15, 2015 at 15:07 said:

Very refreshing love on the river side. Enjoydd reading.

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- Bastet on July 16, 2015 at 08:01 said:
  
  Thanks Menon … a pleasure to see you enjoyed the reading!
  
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Alice Keys on July 16, 2015 at 01:24 said:

How sweet and refreshing! Well done.

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- Bastet on July 16, 2015 at 07:48 said:
  
  Thanks.
  
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Archana Kapoor on July 17, 2015 at 03:03 said:

how romantic…. 🙂

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- Bastet on July 17, 2015 at 05:39 said:
  
  😉
  
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Suzanne on July 17, 2015 at 06:00 said:

This is so light hearted and summery. It is so cold here today it lifted my spirits to read it.

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- Bastet on July 17, 2015 at 06:41 said:
  
  And I could probably have been uplifted by your winter verse because it was so hot here I escaped to the lake to catch the breeze …
  
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  - Suzanne on July 17, 2015 at 08:18 said:
    
    That’s hard for me to imagine right now :). I just had a hot bath to warm up!
    
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    - Bastet on July 17, 2015 at 10:38 said:
      
      lol .. I know and I can believe I’m missing winter!
      
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milan rajkumar on July 19, 2015 at 17:33 said:

so romantic !!! Passionately lovely , Bastet !

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- Bastet on July 19, 2015 at 18:12 said:
  
  Thanks Milan …
  
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