out of Africa
swallows and desert winds
sweep Italian skies
sweep me off my feet
teach me a new summer song
early dawn thoughts
– reflections of passing dreams
tucked away in an album
long ago
on the sands of Massawa
we watched fishermen
sweep the Red Sea each night
filling their nets by morning
© G.s.k. ‘15
Written for – Carpe Diem Haiku Kai: Afriku and
Those are memories you have to cherish Georgia. Two wonderfully written tanka … chapeau! Very much in tune with Adjei … hm … “Out of Africa” a wonderful movie …
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Karen Blixen is one of my favourite writers, though I much preferred her “Babette’s Feast” https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Babette%27s_Feast
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Swept along with your memories, Bastet — !!!
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Nice comment … 😉
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Beautifully written – you had me breathless and I felt carried to the memories – the places, on your words 😀
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Ah … have you too been to Massawa or would it be Italy? Glad the haiku jogged the memories MJ!
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Never have been – but your strength in words – transported me right there 😀
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Cool MJ … hope in the future it will be possible to travel to Massawa again.
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Your sweeping theme sweeps me away! 😉
No Sign of Tears
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🙂 Thanks MMT …
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The Massawa sands and the Red Sea.What an exotic interesting life you have led Georgia…Memories rich fodder for your lovely poetry !
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Yes, it’s true, I’ve had quite a well travelled past Cressida … 🙂
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reading these i feel like i just went on an excursion, or maybe just went through some old post cards, great writing
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In this case Mandy, more than likely old post cards … since the Eritrean war of independence from Ethiopia , I’m told the old city isn’t quite what it was before. But it would be wonderful to be able to see that part of the Red Sea once again.
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Georgia, you swept me off my feet this morning. 🙂
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Why Thanks Celestine!
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The treasures of the Red Sea will be food for many people. Beautiful tanka with picturesque poster.
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Thanks Kalpana … it was/is so splendid.
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You are AWESOME , Georgia ! Both the tankas and the haiku are sublime and ethereal . love at first read !
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Oh wow, thanks Milan .. how nice of you to say so!
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I really like the feel of the first haiku! All are beautifully written.
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Thanks Dolores …
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lovely memories… 🙂
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Thanks Archana … yes they are.
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We can feel this was written from the heart, cara…beautiful…makes one want to go there…bravo, ma chère.
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Merci!
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wonderful haiku set 🙂
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Thanks!
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Fabulous. I enjoyed being swept away by your words this morning. 🙂
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Thanks Alice! 🙂
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🙂
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