
– Alexandre Deschaumes
Oh radiant youth –
standing on the verge of life
heedless before life’s perils
he sails down the open river
mindless of the shallows
he can’t wait to get his teeth
into the meat of life
radiant he walks without a mask
(that will only emerge later)
soon he learns his bones can break
soon he learns those perils
as he walks the lonely track
that many walked before him …
then longing for serenity
after those first of life’s battles
he collapses into reflection
of the what life has thus revealed …
will he become a cynic,
will he be a saint,
or will he be yet another drifter
living from day-to-day?
© G.s.k. ‘15
AND
WOW WOW WOW (translation: Stunning!)
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Oh my .. thanks! 🙂
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Welcome!
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Outstanding write.
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Thanks … had a couple of hours last night and thought I try to write something rather than haiku for a change …
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🙂 Nicely done- I enjoyed reading it. 🙂
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What a remarkable synopsis of life. The lessons we learn as we make life’s journey can both help or hinder us. It really is up us to decide.
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Yes, I think that’s how it works basically … we’ve all had experiences that have shaken us to the roots, but many become stronger through them …
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Great and very thoughtful reflections about life Georgia – and you did a wonderful job writing “outside of haiku” —- there is a graceful flow and feeling to this piece – wonderful!
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Thanks MJ … I do love haiku, but I also like to try to go beyond … once one begins to get fixed into a structure it’s hard to move out of it – one of the reasons I love wordles .. brain exercise!
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Yes – stretching & flexing the creative muscles from time to time is a good avenue to explore and undertake 🙂
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Definitely … keeps you on your toes 😉
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