Restless was I at fifteen,
the stars did call and hormones too!
The sins of youth,
now rattle down my spine
and chill the cry
inside my brain.
The creek did witness,
over time,
more lover’s trysts
then men may know –
now receded
my love pains are dull,
like an echo
of a distant drum,
just a thread of thought
as I walk in the woods –
of plastered hair
on his sweaty brow.
Ah – if I knew then what I know now,
had only gazed in the mirror
to scry my future,
I would have suffered less
and enjoyed it more –
that long-lost first kiss
on a summer’s morn.
© G.s.k. ‘15
The Sunday Whirl and Mindlovesmisery’s Menagerie: Writing Prompt #118 “Collage 3″
Oh My Goodness–this is SO RICH!!!
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A lovely piece.
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Thanks … looking back at our youth can be fun …
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Yep– I do it all the time. Like the man said, life is part action and part memory. 😀
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🙂 yep!
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I like it…
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🙂 thanks Sue.
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the stars did call and hormones too!
This is an excellent piece Georgia the prompts seem made for each other because you combined them so brilliantly =) I married the man I had my first kiss with!
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I’m happy to say I didn’t … 😉
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Oh and thanks for the great comment and compliment … hope your day went well!
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If only we had the benefit of hindsight…i wonder if we would change things however even if we did..somethings are best lived and learned..a very wise poem
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Ah, now, here my hindsight was meant that I should have just enjoyed the kiss without the excess guilty feelings … how complexed I was as a kid!
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Ah, such true wisdom hindsight affords us 😉
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Ah yes, it sure does …
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And I love the way you have written this!!
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Thanks C.C. glad you enjoyed it!
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Brava cara!!! Ouf que j’entends lamenter. Brava!!
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Thanks dearest Oliana!
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Ah yes that famous ” if only ” nice write
Much love…
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Thanks Gillena … 🙂
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