Jisei thoughts at dawn
imagining that walk
through deserts, woods and towns
a last poem
this grey dawn
the cock crows thrice
not even a crow caws
walking a Silk Road
into a new adventure
through the desert
summer sunshine wans
in the woods – trees turn bright red
the sparrows are gone
as the fall rains begin
my thoughts turn to winter
© G.s.k. ‘15
I dedicate this post to Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille which heavily influence my morning thoughts.
Again — speechless. (Sigh….)
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Wowza! Glad you enjoyed!
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Very much 🙂
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Ahhh cara, this is beautiful…he performs with such passion!
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I agree and I’m glad you enjoyed the post! 🙂
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Your Jisei is so moving, cara, especially the last stanza…I’m not sure I can write mine. I did write something 25 years ago when studying Gerontology…I have to think about this one .
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Thanks … I’ve written other jisei over the last couple of years … and interesting exercise of reflection on one’s life I think ..
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Yes, it is…25 years ago I wrote something I wanted on my tombstone about something I had accomplished…today I don’t want that…just want my family and friends to know how much I love them
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🙂 and that sounds to me like it could make a great jisei
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Not sure I kept any of those notes…I like the new me better…less baggage, less clutter:)
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Ach … the new jisei doesn’t need old thoughts …
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So true…when you write “Ach” I can hear you speaking to me every time 🙂
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LOL … cool!
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Chapeau! Awesome music … makes the jisei even stronger, I like that tanka-jisei …
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Thanks … I love Kitaro, I’m glad you enjoyed the tanka-jisei, I know it’s not used to write jisei but I liked it a lot myself 😉
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