autumn moon
her shimmering light
unites friends
here and over the ocean
she smiles on us
misty secrets
shimmering in fall
moonlit leaves
(in reply to Paloma’s haiku)
hidden moon
she modestly hides
behind veils
keeping watch
guiding her steps
harvest moon
(in reply to Tournesol’s haiku
© G.s.k. ‘15
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I’m loving those misty secrets. I hope there are more of them to glimpse! 😉
Waiting for Moonrise
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Let’s hope so! 🙂
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captures the essence of autumn…..and creates a sense of life lived, and secrets kept…..beautiful…..:)
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Thanks so much for your critique … I enjoyed it very much 🙂
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Wow wow wow!! And the photo art is Magnificent!!
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Thanks! 🙂
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🙂
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Gorgeous! I love your responses — and — shashin no uta reemerges! Nicely done! Wow —!
Hugs —
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Yep … not a new one …perhaps later this week …
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Huge hug —
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Got 6 pretty good shots of the moon last night! Yeah!!!!
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Nice!!! You’re lucky!
It rained here 😦
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Here when the moon was supposed to be blood red … we had thick black clouds …. but last night, despite the clouds there was enough openings to take those photos … but I missed the best one getting my phone out. Sorry you missed it both nights.
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Yeah … plague and pestilence here … lol
(okay, that’s not funny … but … you know …)
Very happy you were able to capture at least something. 🙂
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Me too … didn’t look like I’d get anything for the autumn moon ..
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That’s a beautiful idea – replying to others’ haiku! Nice page to read.
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Thanks Hamish .. glad you liked the idea.
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