this day is over
burning up in splendid pinks
phoenix ‘s rebirth
over rainbows
some find their nirvana
other’s more rain
shooting a sunset
could be a glorious dawn
until it’s over
over the years
drops of cement harden hearts
too many repairs
the song is over
the silence of the moment
vibrant echoes
© G.s.k. ‘15
over the fence
some say the grass is greener
over the fence
an ancient fence
old, distorted and crumpled
like old age
lines and squiggles
in a black and white world
no shades of green
© G.s.k. ‘15
(as I wrote request these last three haiku upon her request I dedicate them to Barb Taub)
wonderfully
renews
day’s ending 🙂
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🙂
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Well done–I can’t choose a fave part 🙂
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Now that makes me happy … 😀 (I think)
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It means there were too many fave’s for the comment box.
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Ah .. that’s what I thought you meant 😀 !!!
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I usually try to comment on something specific–but I’ve literally spent all freaking day on the computer, and that is not gonna work for this gal…
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LOL … well, that is something I rarely get to do .. I’ve my Jiminy Cricket that makes me stay away from the computer — as much as he can. But I do know it’s hard to keep being inventive whilst commenting esp. after a tonne of reading- like with CDHK or OctPoWriMo!
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I think I need a Jiminy 🙂
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Nope … you don’t believe me.
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Oh these are simply great. 🙂
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Why thanks!
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Loved the progression of your haiku. ♥
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Thanks Kathy!
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Beautiful writing!
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I like all your Haiku but especially love #2and #4. 😊
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Thanks Leonas!
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simply awesome buddy! 🙂
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Thanks Archana .. glad you think so 🙂 hugs!
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Like all of them especially the cement one:)
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Wow Georgia , a fountain of beautiful words !
The ancient fence is timeless !
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Why Thanks!
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