A Single Tree – Haiku – November 11, 2015

a single tree

a single tree
alone on the mountain stands
misty sunset

© G.s.k. ‘15

This is an attempt to use the “yugen” haiku writing technique … for more information on the technique click HERE.  An example which I enjoyed very much was written by Chèvrefeuille:

from a treetop
emptiness dropped down
in a cicada shell
the soothing sound of spring rain
makes the silence stronger  

© Chèvrefeuille

10 thoughts on “A Single Tree – Haiku – November 11, 2015

  1. I lile the use of negative space in this photo. Not really “negative” of course, but visually so restrained and meditative.

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  2. Your photo is stunning and completes your haiku..this Yugen, is not easy to write. I am just reading this post and trying to get it…reading other contributions like yours is helping.

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in shadows light - walking under weeping pines - spring rain

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