reflections
the city lives twice
in the river
shimmering light
dancing moon light on the lake
in shimmering light
among the trees
filtering through the leaves
guiding light
© G.s.k. ‘15
Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #19 as is above; as below
And I could add looking at my header:
crossing the bridge
upon the flowing river
the bridge crosses
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Enjoying the idea of the city living twice — 😀
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luv the first one best
much love…
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Venice?
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Padua 🙂
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Belluno, my second home. Hi neighbor 🙂
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I really love the first one. 🙂
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Thanks
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Love the play with light! Made me happy and smile 🙂
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And that makes me happy!
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I LOVE the opening lines–captivating!
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Thanks J! 🙂
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Welcome!
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Not a fan of cities but you make it sound very nice!
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I know what you mean about cities … but here almost everything compared to the U.S. is a city 🙂
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You are in Italy?
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Yes, I live in the far north of Italy about 300 clicks from the Austrian boarder if I keep going straight and about the same if I turn left at Bolzano. It’s the most beautiful, if not the most “historically” endowed region of Italy … we don’t have fancy architecture, but we have mountains, lakes, rivers and trees!
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My parents visited Italy and glowed about it!
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It definitely has its good points … you should try to come some day.
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Beautifully done!
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Thanks!
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