Following their ancient rounds
Sounds of joy floats through the town
Down the alleys ‘cross the mall
All the children dream of this:
Kris Kringle’s bright reindeer sleigh
Away on Christmas evening
Following their ancient rounds …
In children’s dreams:
Creams and candy
Dandy toys too
Blue berry pies
Skies with snow-flakes
Skates on lakes – spin
In children’s dreams.
© G.s.k. ‘15
This morning I had a really stimulating meet with The Secret Keeper about her last week’s poetry prompt (Weekly Writing Prompt – please click to see the interesting prompts she puts up), intrigued that she’d written with the combination of the circular poem and the twenty-eight for her 18 December post (spoilers!) I thought I’d like to try it – but forgot that the twenty eight is a seven syllable poem in only four lines, however, thank heaven’s there’s a variation .. so I wrote the variation as a “twenty-eight circular poem” (seven lines with four syllables each).
I’ll link this to B&P’s Shadorma & Beyond – Jane’s Circular Poem … (also The Twenty-Eight)
Very magical! I like what you did here. Plus the photo is very intriguing 🙂
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Well done, Bravo!!
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Oh yay!! another prompt for Monday, I was looking for something to inspire a flash fiction but lately I am trying (inspiried by Jules) to write flash fictions 99 words,no more, no less…what a challenge!
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That does sound like an interesting challenge .. good for Jules!
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She is the one that turned me on to prompts at carrot ranch http://carrotranch.com/2015/12/17/december-16-flash-fiction-challenge/
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