flickering candles
shadows dancing on the wall
winter memories
© G.s.k. ‘15
Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #23 finding the divine in the common
the one thing
that lights my world
a rice gourd
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
smoke
incense unrolls
itself
© Jane Reichhold
the liquid sunset
touches the sea
I touch the sea, too
scent of falling leaves
– sense of fading dreams
suddenly, a ladybug!
© Hamish Gunn (a.k.a. Pirate)
a single tulip
my companion
for one night
© Chèvrefeuille (2005)
Winter memories – I guess we all like this during the Christmas season, but here it’s already 13.5° C in the morning. So, I guess I’ll light a candle this evening.
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The glow of candlelight! Fondly remembered. Lovely Georgia!
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Love this!
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you’ve captured a beautiful moment
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I like this one very much, as shadows can be so cleverly used in haiku, and here certainly were. They also made your haiku very much alive, as well as bringing in a touch of Plato philosophy!
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An interesting comment Hamish … I adore candles and the dancing shadows they create. Glad you found Plato in the haiku.
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