first light of the sun
streaming upon this new year
in fragile silence
here, the mountains shine
tipping over the skyline
first sunlight
as the day and year are born
a sparrow greets the dawn
© G.s.k. ‘16
Carpe Diem #888 Hatsuhikari (first light of the sun)
In this first episode of the year, on Carpe Diem Haiku Kai we begin to explore modern and classical kigo or season words. In honour of the day hatsuhikari (hatsu means first and hikari means light of the sun) which is an excellent kigo for new year morning (which gives us a sense of the renewal of this special day) and therefore a splendid winter kigo.
winter morning
first light of the sun … so fragile
reflects in the snow
© Chèvrefeuille
I love the newness of this. Those golden moments when the sun peeks out. Beautiful, Georgia!
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Thanks Carol! I love sunrises and it was the perfect prompt to use one!
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Welcome!
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Reads beautifully out loud.
Best wishes to you too.
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Thanks Joanna for reading it out loud! And the best to you too.
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Fragile yes are the beginnings of a New Year – hope that it grows bold and strong. A very Happy 2016!
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Thank you so much … and may your year be the year that sees your dreams come true!
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this is so hopefull
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Thanks!
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I like the use “streaming” here. it’s a beautiful imagery. water or stream has this therapeutic effect of soothing the human body from drudgery and thus make us refreshed one more time to face the other days ahead. surely good things will stream into our lives this new year–Adjei
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Thanks you so much Adjei for your lovely comment and augur for this upcoming year … I’m sure we will all find new depths in this upcoming year refreshed by the stream of life.
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This is so you and your morning haiku…fragile silence…the first sun as the first month of the year are fragile and filled with promise if treated with care. brava, cara!
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Thanks Cheryl-Lynn … in fact I felt in my element with this kigo. I’m very glad you enjoyed it. And how are you doing today? Breathing freer?
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Beautifully written!
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Thanks!
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