floating blossoms
fluttering o’er the orchards
majestic monarchs
first morning light
the cuckoo calls from woods
like clock-work
in September
the salmon swim down stream
the ocean calls
Mallard ducks
laughing along the lakefront
the geese flew south
© G.s.k. ‘16
Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #65 combining animals and seasons
Today’s splendid episode was presented by Sara McNulty of Purple Pen in Portland for her award-winning post for our special Christmas Kamishibai challenge. Here is one of the haiku she used to inspire her post:
The harvest moon–
rabbits go scampering
across Lake Suwa
~ Buson ~
And here are two of her own haiku:
Autumn
black nose sticking up
Is the dog buried under
a pile of leaves?
Summer
hot night
chorus outside my window
tree frog serenade
© Sara McNulty
perfect seasonal sequence. I like the way you hint at Winter with the ducks being there. A layered kigo.
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Thanks Joanna – our ducks which would usually be seasonal birds now stay here year round … so I decided to talk about them as laughing at the migrant birds .. I’m glad you enjoyed the post.
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I like this one very much, and the alliteration of the words was great. Sweet ducks! 🙂
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Thanks I do love our ducks very much.
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I like your 2nd haiku especially for the nice humor in it.
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Thank you Chèvrefeuille .. I’m trying to investigate senryu .. it has come a long way since the days when people sat around bars joking with verse I think.
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These are so clever. Love the cuckoos!
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Thanks … love hearing them in the summer.
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Beautiful…loved them… 🙂
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Many thanks 🙂
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I adore animals in life and in haiku! Splendid, Georgia!
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So true Carol ..
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