up and down the hills
the waif staggers zigzagging
only welcome if she paid
alone – she left the city
© G.s.k. ‘16
The tanka is inspired by a story Basho told in his Narrow Road:
The voices of two young women whispering in the next room, however, came creeping into my ears. They were talking to an elderly man, and I gathered from their whispers that they were concubines from Niigata in the province of Echigo, and that the old man, having accompanied them on their way to the Ise Shrine, was going home the next day with their messages to their relatives and friends.
I sympathized with them, for as they said themselves among their whispers, their life was such that they had to drift along even as the white froth of waters that beat on the shore, and having been forced to find a new companion each night, they had to renew their pledge of love at every turn, thus proving each time the fatal sinfulness of their nature. I listened to their whispers till fatigue lulled me to sleep. When, on the following morning, I stepped into the road, I met these women again. They approached me and said with some tears in their eyes, ‘We are forlorn travelers, complete strangers on this road. Will you be kind enough at least to let us follow you? If you are a priest as your black robe tells us, have mercy on us and help us to learn the great love of our Savior.’ ‘I am greatly touched by your words,’ I said in reply after a moment’s thought, ‘but we have so many places to stop at on the way that we cannot help you. Go as other travelers go. If you have trust in the Savior, you will never lack His divine protection.’ As I stepped away from them, however, my heart was filled with persisting pity.
in the same house
prostitutes, too, slept:
bush clover and moon
© Basho (Tr. David Landis Barnhill)
Sending a “hello” from Virginia … concert is tomorrow … but wanted you to know I enjoyed the tanka. Nicely told 🙂
🙂 I hope you had a great time at the concert … thanks for thinking about me!
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comes at a small cost
sometimes not 🙂
That is most certainly true. 😉
Beautiful tanka, splendid photo!!!!
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Thanks Janice .. glad you liked it.