Meditation in Pi
that twilight
silence
echoed in sleep:
waves
crashed upon the shoals
vibrating into the infinite
*colours
vibrantly reflecting
the myriad shades
were refracted
in winter sunset
**of such things miracles are made
these vibrations of infinite waves
that seem very common place
but are intangible as is life –
as is death.
© G.s.k. ‘16
Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #73 pi-ku another nice poetry form (reprise)
Let us try to make a Pi-ku poem with the following digits(3,14159) the lines of the Pi-ku and the syllables-count would become the following:
1st line 3 syllables; 2nd line 1 syllable; 3rd line 4 syllables; 4th line 1 syllable; 5th line 5 syllables and the 6th line would be 9 syllables. To me this sounds great and will be for sure a challenge. So let me try to make my Pi-ku longer with those new lines and their syllables-count:
the sun rises
the heat
already tangible
mist
spirals above the stream
another day starts in mysterious ways
© Chèvrefeuille
*I went beyond the pi-ku to reflect upon the further values of pi itself (*26535) (**89793) – Bastet 😉
So many things that I like about this but I love that you extended it and the word choice of shoals! Wonderful!
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Thanks … I was just going to do the one line but got wooed into writing more, glad you enjoyed the poem.
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You’re welcome!
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🙂
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Wow Georgia, you have nailed this pi-ku in a great way and that you have tried to extend it even more is really awesome.
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I’d not come across this original idea – way cool – I had a lot of fun writing this post.
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Beautiful, Georgia. I’ll tweet this in honor of World Poetry Day. 🙂
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Thanks Brenda!
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