Burning Advice – Shadorma – March 17, 2016

“Cooling waves”
pontificated
bright-eyed Sue
“won’t prevent
Dave getting frightfully burnt
just watch and you’ll see.”

And of course
she was just too right!
A lobster
was paler
than young Dave’s skin that evening
and far less in pain!

He’s happy
although a bit crisp.
He did say
he hates Sue’s
haunty know-it-all advice
and would druther burn.

© G.s.k. ‘16

 

Shadorma (3 – 5 – 3 – 3 – 7 – 5)

(5) Words: | WAVE | COOL| PREVENT | BRIGHT | WATCH |

Weekly Writing Prompt #28 Week 14th March 2016

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